111 年 國立臺灣大學翻譯碩士學程甲組《筆譯基本議題》
第 1 題25 分
In the opening pages of Contra Instrumentalism, Lawrence Venuti argues for a "hermeneutic model" as against the "instrumentalist model" of translation. Briefly define the two models in question and then paraphrase his argument by paying special attention to the key idea of "invariant" he uses throughout.
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本題主要探討 Lawrence Venuti 在其著作《Contra Instrumentalism》中提出的兩種翻譯模式:「詮釋學模式」(hermeneutic model)與「工具主義模式」(instrumentalist model),以及 Venuti 如何以「不變要素」(invariant)的概念來論證其觀點。
核心觀念: 翻譯理論中的兩種主要取徑,以及 Venuti 對「不變要素」的詮釋。
解題步驟:
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定義「工具主義模式」 (Instrumentalist Model):
- 此模式將翻譯視為一種工具,其主要目標是將原文(source text)的意義或功能「轉移」(transfer)到譯入語(target text)中。
- 翻譯的成效好壞,主要取決於譯文是否能準確、有效地達成預設的目的,例如:傳達原文的訊息、滿足特定讀者的需求、或在目標文化中產生預期的效果。
- 此模式傾向於將原文視為一個可以被「複製」或「重現」的對象,而譯者則扮演著技術性的轉換者角色。
- 重點在於「結果」(outcome)和「功能」(function),而非翻譯過程本身或原文與譯文之間的關係。
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定義「詮釋學模式」 (Hermeneutic Model):
- 此模式將翻譯視為一種「詮釋」(interpretation)的過程,強調譯者與原文之間複雜的互動關係。
- 翻譯不是簡單的意義轉移,而是譯者對原文進行理解、闡釋,並在譯入語中重新建構其意義的動態過程。
- 此模式關注翻譯的「過程」(process)、「理解」(understanding)、「對話」(dialogue)以及原文與譯者之間的「互文性」(intertextuality)。
- 譯者被視為一個主動的詮釋者,其自身的文化背景、價值觀和理解都會影響翻譯的結果。
第 2 題15 分
What is "interpretant" as used in Lawrence Venuti's critique of the “instrumentalist model" of translation. Give examples that he mentions.
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本題主要探討 Lawrence Venuti 在批評「工具主義翻譯模式」時所使用的「詮釋者」(interpretant)概念,並要求舉出 Venuti 提及的具體例子。
核心觀念: 詮釋學中的「詮釋者」(interpretant)概念及其在 Venuti 翻譯理論中的應用。
解題步驟:
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解釋「詮釋者」(Interpretant)的概念:
- 「Interpretant」這個概念源自符號學家 Charles Sanders Peirce 的理論。
- 在 Peirce 的理論中,一個符號(sign)的意義並非固定不變,而是由其「詮釋者」(interpretant)來定義。
- 「Interpretant」可以被理解為符號所激發出來的「心智概念」(mental conception)或「效果」(effect)。它不是指另一種語言的翻譯,而是指符號在接收者心中產生的意義或理解。
- Peirce 將 Interpretant 分為三種類型:
- Immediate Interpretant (即時詮釋者): 符號在其自身內涵上的意義,不依賴於任何實際的接收者。
- Dynamic Interpretant (動態詮釋者): 符號在某個特定心靈中產生的實際效果或理解。
- Final Interpretant (最終詮釋者): 符號在理想的、無限的詮釋社群中可能產生的最終意義。
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Venuti 如何運用「Interpretant」批評「工具主義模式」:
- Venuti 借用 Peirce 的「Interpretant」概念,來批評工具主義翻譯模式將翻譯簡化為「意義轉移」的觀點。
- 工具主義模式傾向於認為,原文的意義(或其 Interpretant)可以被直接、忠實地轉移到譯文。
- Venuti 則認為,翻譯的過程實際上是譯者對原文進行「再詮釋」,而譯文(target text)本身就是原文(source text)的「Interpretant」之一。
- 更重要的是,譯文所產生的 Interpretant(即譯文在讀者心中激發的意義或效果)會與原文的 Interpretant 產生差異,因為譯文受到譯入語、譯者、讀者、以及目標文化等因素的影響。
- 因此,Venuti 認為,工具主義模式試圖追求的「意義不變」或「功能不變」是無法實現的,因為每一次的翻譯都是一次新的詮釋,都會產生新的 Interpretant。
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舉例說明 (Examples Mentioned by Venuti):
- Venuti 在批評工具主義模式時,通常會引用一些翻譯理論家或實踐者的觀點,來闡述他們如何試圖確保翻譯的「不變性」。
- 雖然考古題中沒有直接提供 Venuti 的原文,但根據 Venuti 的著作(如 The Translator's Invisibility 和 Translation Changes Everything),他常批評的對象包括:
第 3 題20 分
Lawrence Venuti cites many examples of translation theorists/scholars who are immersed in, or unwittingly fall victim to, the "instrumentalist model" of translation. Choose one example that you understand best and recall Venuti's rationale.
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本題要求選擇一個 Venuti 提出的、符合「工具主義翻譯模式」的翻譯理論家或學者,並解釋 Venuti 為何認為該學者落入了工具主義的陷阱。
核心觀念: Venuti 對特定翻譯理論家或學者的批判,以及其批判所依據的「工具主義翻譯模式」的特徵。
解題步驟:
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理解「工具主義翻譯模式」的特徵(複習自第一題):
- 將翻譯視為工具,強調意義或功能的「轉移」。
- 追求譯文的「準確性」、「清晰性」和「有效性」。
- 將原文視為可被複製或重現的對象。
- 譯者被視為技術性的轉換者。
- 假設存在可以保持不變的「不變要素」(如意義、訊息、功能)。
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選擇一個 Venuti 批評的學者/理論家:
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Venuti 在其著作中批評了許多學者,其中較為人熟知且經常被引用的包括:
- Eugene Nida: Nida 的「動態對等」(dynamic equivalence)理論,雖然試圖關注譯文讀者的反應,但 Venuti 認為其潛藏著一種對原文「訊息」的工具主義態度,即認為「訊息」本身是獨立於其語境和詮釋的,可以被有效傳遞。
- Functionalist theorists (如 Holz-Mänttäri, Vermeer): 這些理論家強調翻譯的「目的」(Skopos),認為譯文的價值在於其在目標語境中的功能。Venuti 認為,雖然強調功能看似脫離了傳統的意義對等,但過於強調特定功能(如 Informative, Operative)的實現,仍然可能將翻譯視為一種達成特定目的的工具,而忽略了翻譯過程的複雜性、譯者的詮釋以及原文與譯文之間更深層的文化關係。
- Early translation theorists (強調忠實於原文的意義): 許多傳統的翻譯理論家,如 Jerome,強調譯文應忠實於原文的「意義」。Venuti 認為,這種對「意義」的絕對忠實,實際上是將意義視為一個獨立、不變的實體,可以被工具化地轉移,是一種典型的工具主義思維。
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以下以 Eugene Nida 為例進行說明,因為他是 Venuti 常批評的對象之一,且其理論較為人熟知。
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解釋 Venuti 的理由(以 Nida 為例):
- Nida 的理論核心: Nida 在其《Toward a Science of Translating》中提出了「動態對等」(dynamic eq
第 II 題40 分
What follows is the opening paragraphs of Ralph Waldo Emerson's "American Scholars" translated into Chinese. Describe the translation by paying special attention to its "information structure" and "coherence." Credits will be given to candidates who can cite specific and relevant instances to support their observations and engage themselves in sustained academic discussion of translation/translating.
【題組共用題幹】
The American Scholar
AN ORATION DELIVERED BEFORE THE PHI BETA KAPPA SOCIETY, AT CAMBRIDGE, AUGUST 31, 1837.
MR. PRESIDENT AND GENTLEMEN:
I greet you on the recommencement of our literary year. Our anniversary is one of hope, and, perhaps, not enough of labor. We do not meet for games of strength or skill, for the recitation of histories, tragedies, and odes, like the ancient Greeks; for parliaments of love and poesy, like the Troubadours; nor for the advancement of science, like our contemporaries in the British and European capitals. Thus far, our holiday has been simply a friendly sign of the survival of the love of letters amongst a people too busy to give to letters any more. As such it is precious as the sign of an indestructible instinct. Perhaps the time is already come when it ought to be, and will be, something else; when the sluggard intellect of this continent will look from under its iron lids and fill the postponed expectation of the world with something better than the exertions of mechanical skill. Our day of dependence, our long apprenticeship to the learning of other lands, draws to a close. The millions that around us are rushing into life, cannot always be fed on the sere remains of foreign harvests. Events, actions arise, that must be sung, that will sing themselves. Who can doubt that poetry will revive and lead in a new age, as the star in the constellation Harp, which now flames in our zenith, astronomers announce, shall one day be the pole-star for a thousand years?
In this hope I accept the topic which not only usage but the nature of our association seem to prescribe to this day, the AMERICAN SCHOLAR. Year by year we come up hither to read one more chapter of his biography. Let us inquire what light new days and events have thrown on his character and his hopes.
It is one of those fables which out of an unknown antiquity convey an unlooked-for wisdom, that the gods, in the beginning, divided Man into men, that he might be more helpful to himself; just as the hand was divided into fingers, the better to answer its end.
The old fable covers a doctrine ever new and sublime; that there is One Man, -present to all particular men only partially, or through one faculty; and that you must take the whole society to find the whole man. Man is not a farmer, or a professor, or an engineer, but he is all. Man is priest, and scholar, and statesman, and producer, and soldier. In the divided or social state these functions are parcelled out to individuals, each of whom aims to do his stint of the joint work, whilst each other performs his. The fable implies that the individual, to possess himself, must sometimes return from his own labor to embrace all the other laborers. But, unfortunately, this original unit, this fountain of power, has been so distributed to multitudes, has been so minutely subdivided and peddled out, that it is spilled into drops, and cannot be gathered. The state of society is one in which the members have suffered amputation from the trunk, and strut about so many walking monsters, a good finger, a neck, a stomach, an elbow, but never a man.
Man is thus metamorphosed into a thing, into many things. The planter, who is Man sent out into the field to gather food, is seldom cheered by any idea of the true dignity of his ministry. He sees his bushel and his cart, and nothing beyond, and sinks into the farmer, instead of Man on the farm. The tradesman scarcely ever gives an ideal worth to his work, but is ridden by the routine of his craft, and the soul is subject to dollars. The priest becomes a form; the attorney a statute-book; the mechanic a machine; the sailor a rope of the ship.
In this distribution of functions the scholar is the delegated intellect. In the right state he is Man Thinking. In the degenerate state, when the victim of society, he tends to become a mere thinker, or still worse, the parrot of other men's thinking.
In this view of him, as Man Thinking, the theory of his office is contained. Him Nature solicits with all her placid, all her monitory pictures; him the past instructs; him the future invites. Is not indeed every man a student, and do not all things exist for the student's behoof? And, finally, is not the true scholar the only true master?
But the old oracle said, "All things have two handles: beware of the wrong one." In life, too often, the scholar errs with mankind and forfeits his privilege. Let us see him in his school, and consider him in reference to the main influences he receives.
I. The first in time and the first in importance of the influences upon the mind is that of nature. Every day, the sun; and, after sunset, Night and her stars. Ever the winds blow; ever the grass grows. Every day, men and women, conversing-beholding and beholden. The scholar is he of all men whom this spectacle most engages. He must settle its value in his mind. What is nature to him? There is never a beginning, there is never an end, to the inexplicable continuity of this web of God, but always circular power returning into itself. Therein it resembles his own spirit, whose beginning, whose ending, he never can find, so entire, so boundless. Far too as her splendors shine, system on system shooting forth, -the Universe, in its entirety, a circle, whose centre is everywhere, whose circumference is nowhere.
(以下為中文翻譯段落)
一個好手指,一個頸項,一個胃,一個肘彎,但是從來不是一個人。
社會是這樣一種狀態,每一個人都像是從身上鋸下來的一段肢體,昂然地走來走去,許多怪物——
源,已經分散給眾,這樣精細地分了又分,零售銷光了,使它潑開來成爲水滴,不能再聚攏了。
就必須時時由他自己的崗位回來,擁抱一切其他的勞動者。但是很不幸,這原來的單位,這力的泉
共同工作中派給他的一部份,各人站在自己的崗位上。那寓言暗示着,每個人如果要掌握他自己,
人。在分裂的狀態中——————也就是說:在社會的狀態中——————這些職務是分給了各個人,每人指望做那
人不是一個農民,或是教授,或是工程師,但是他是一切。人是祭司、學者、政治家、生產者、軍
於所有的各個人裏面,或是存在於某一種與賦裹;你必須觀察整個的社會,才能夠得到整個的人。
初,諸神把「人」分爲人們,使他比較便於幫助他自己;就像把一隻手分成五隻手指,可以更有用
有一個寓言—————是遠古不知道什麼年代產生的這種寓言,傳下一種意想不到的智慧———說在最
又一章。讓我們來探究,新時代與新的事件怎樣幫助說明他的性格,他的希望。
會的性質,似乎限定要用這題目————「美國的哲人」。一年又一年,我們到這裏來讚他的傳記中的
我抱着這樣的希望,接受了這題目—————今天這一天的演講,不但由於慣例,而且由於我們道協
【題組共用題幹】
The American Scholar
AN ORATION DELIVERED BEFORE THE PHI BETA KAPPA SOCIETY, AT CAMBRIDGE, AUGUST 31, 1837.
MR. PRESIDENT AND GENTLEMEN:
I greet you on the recommencement of our literary year. Our anniversary is one of hope, and, perhaps, not enough of labor. We do not meet for games of strength or skill, for the recitation of histories, tragedies, and odes, like the ancient Greeks; for parliaments of love and poesy, like the Troubadours; nor for the advancement of science, like our contemporaries in the British and European capitals. Thus far, our holiday has been simply a friendly sign of the survival of the love of letters amongst a people too busy to give to letters any more. As such it is precious as the sign of an indestructible instinct. Perhaps the time is already come when it ought to be, and will be, something else; when the sluggard intellect of this continent will look from under its iron lids and fill the postponed expectation of the world with something better than the exertions of mechanical skill. Our day of dependence, our long apprenticeship to the learning of other lands, draws to a close. The millions that around us are rushing into life, cannot always be fed on the sere remains of foreign harvests. Events, actions arise, that must be sung, that will sing themselves. Who can doubt that poetry will revive and lead in a new age, as the star in the constellation Harp, which now flames in our zenith, astronomers announce, shall one day be the pole-star for a thousand years?
In this hope I accept the topic which not only usage but the nature of our association seem to prescribe to this day, the AMERICAN SCHOLAR. Year by year we come up hither to read one more chapter of his biography. Let us inquire what light new days and events have thrown on his character and his hopes.
It is one of those fables which out of an unknown antiquity convey an unlooked-for wisdom, that the gods, in the beginning, divided Man into men, that he might be more helpful to himself; just as the hand was divided into fingers, the better to answer its end.
The old fable covers a doctrine ever new and sublime; that there is One Man, -present to all particular men only partially, or through one faculty; and that you must take the whole society to find the whole man. Man is not a farmer, or a professor, or an engineer, but he is all. Man is priest, and scholar, and statesman, and producer, and soldier. In the divided or social state these functions are parcelled out to individuals, each of whom aims to do his stint of the joint work, whilst each other performs his. The fable implies that the individual, to possess himself, must sometimes return from his own labor to embrace all the other laborers. But, unfortunately, this original unit, this fountain of power, has been so distributed to multitudes, has been so minutely subdivided and peddled out, that it is spilled into drops, and cannot be gathered. The state of society is one in which the members have suffered amputation from the trunk, and strut about so many walking monsters, a good finger, a neck, a stomach, an elbow, but never a man.
Man is thus metamorphosed into a thing, into many things. The planter, who is Man sent out into the field to gather food, is seldom cheered by any idea of the true dignity of his ministry. He sees his bushel and his cart, and nothing beyond, and sinks into the farmer, instead of Man on the farm. The tradesman scarcely ever gives an ideal worth to his work, but is ridden by the routine of his craft, and the soul is subject to dollars. The priest becomes a form; the attorney a statute-book; the mechanic a machine; the sailor a rope of the ship.
In this distribution of functions the scholar is the delegated intellect. In the right state he is Man Thinking. In the degenerate state, when the victim of society, he tends to become a mere thinker, or still worse, the parrot of other men's thinking.
In this view of him, as Man Thinking, the theory of his office is contained. Him Nature solicits with all her placid, all her monitory pictures; him the past instructs; him the future invites. Is not indeed every man a student, and do not all things exist for the student's behoof? And, finally, is not the true scholar the only true master?
But the old oracle said, "All things have two handles: beware of the wrong one." In life, too often, the scholar errs with mankind and forfeits his privilege. Let us see him in his school, and consider him in reference to the main influences he receives.
I. The first in time and the first in importance of the influences upon the mind is that of nature. Every day, the sun; and, after sunset, Night and her stars. Ever the winds blow; ever the grass grows. Every day, men and women, conversing-beholding and beholden. The scholar is he of all men whom this spectacle most engages. He must settle its value in his mind. What is nature to him? There is never a beginning, there is never an end, to the inexplicable continuity of this web of God, but always circular power returning into itself. Therein it resembles his own spirit, whose beginning, whose ending, he never can find, so entire, so boundless. Far too as her splendors shine, system on system shooting forth, -the Universe, in its entirety, a circle, whose centre is everywhere, whose circumference is nowhere.
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本題要求分析 Ralph Waldo Emerson 的「美國學者」(The American Scholar)演講稿的中文翻譯,重點關注其「資訊結構」(information structure)和「連貫性」(coherence),並引用具體例子來支持論點。
核心觀念: 翻譯文本的資訊結構與連貫性分析,以及翻譯如何影響這些層面。
解題步驟:
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理解「資訊結構」 (Information Structure):
- 資訊結構指的是句子或段落中資訊的組織方式,特別是新舊資訊的配置。
- 在英語中,通常將「舊資訊」(given information, topic)置於句首,而將「新資訊」(new information, comment)置於句末,以建立流暢的閱讀體驗。
- 「主題」(theme)和「述位」(rheme)是相關概念:Theme 是句子開頭提供已知資訊的部分,Rheme 是句子中提供新資訊的部分。
- 翻譯時,如果目標語言的資訊結構偏好與原文不同,譯者需要進行調整,以確保譯文的自然度和可讀性。
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理解「連貫性」 (Coherence):
- 連貫性指的是文本意義上的邏輯關聯和一致性。它不僅僅是句子之間的語法連接(cohesion),更是意義層面的緊密結合。
- 一個連貫的文本,其各部分之間的意義關係清晰,讀者能夠理解整個文本所要表達的整體意義。
- 連貫性受到詞彙選擇、句子結構、段落組織、邏輯關係(如因果、轉折、並列)等多方面因素的影響。
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分析英文原文與中文翻譯的對比:
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題幹說明: 提供的中文翻譯是 Emerson 演講稿的開頭部分。我們需要對比其與英文原文,分析翻譯在資訊結構和連貫性上的處理。
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對比與分析:
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段落順序與開頭處理:
- 英文原文開頭: 「MR. PRESIDENT AND GENTLEMEN: I greet you on the recommencement of our literary year. Our anniversary is one of hope, and, perhaps, not enough of labor.」
- 中文翻譯開頭: 「我抱着這樣的希望,接受了這題目—————今天這一天的演講,不但由於慣例,而且由於我們道協會的性質,似乎限定要用這題目—————「美國的哲人」。一年又一年,我們到這裏來讚他的傳記中的又一章。讓我們來探究,新時代與新的事件怎樣幫助說明他的性格,他的希望。」
- 分析: 這裡出現了一個明顯的問題。中文翻譯並非直接對應英文原文的第一段(I greet you...),而是跳到了英文原文的第二、三段,甚至更後面的部分(關於「美國的哲人」這個題目)。這造成了資訊結構的錯亂,因為中文翻譯的開頭部分,其主題和語境與英文原文的開頭完全不同。英文原文是直接的問候和開場白,而中文翻譯卻直接進入了演講的主題和背景介紹。
- 資訊結構的影響: 英文原文的開頭,"I greet you..." 是主題(Theme),"on the recommencement..." 是述位(Rheme)。中文翻譯的開頭「我抱着這樣的希望」作為主題,後面接續的內容提供了新資訊。然而,由於內容的跳躍,中文翻譯的開頭資訊(關於接受題目的背景)對於剛開始閱讀的讀者來說,顯得突兀,缺乏自然的引入。
- 連貫性的影響: 這種內容的跳躍直接破壞了原文的連貫性。英文原文的開頭建立了一個特定的場景(演講、問候、對協會的說明),然後才引出主題。中文翻譯卻省略了這個場景的建立,直接切入主題,使得前半部分的連貫性較弱,讀者可能無法立刻理解為何演講者「抱着這樣的希望」接受這個題目。
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對「Man」的翻譯與資訊呈現:
- 英文原文: 「It is one of those fables which out of an unknown antiquity convey an unlooked-for wisdom, that the gods, in the beginning, divided Man into men, that he might be more helpful to himself; just as the hand was divided into fingers, the better to answer its end. The old fable covers a doctrine ever new and sublime; that there is One Man, -present to all particular men only partially, or through one faculty; and that you must take the whole society to find the whole man. Man is not a farmer, or a professor, or an engineer, but he is all. Man is priest, and scholar, and statesman, and producer, and soldier. In the divided or social state these functions are parcelled out to individuals...」
- 中文翻譯: 「有一個寓言—————是遠古不知道什麼年代產生的這種寓言,傳下一種意想不到的智慧———說在最初,諸神把「人」分爲人們,使他比較便於幫助他自己;就像把一隻手分成五隻手指,可以更有用。這寓言暗示着,每個人如果要掌握他自己,就必須時時由他自己的崗位回來,擁抱一切其他的勞動者。但是很不幸,這原來的單位,這力的泉源,已經分散給眾,這樣精細地分了又分,零售銷光了,使它潑開來成爲水滴,不能再聚攏了。社會是這樣一種狀態,每一個人都像是從身上鋸下來的一段肢體,昂然地走來走去,許多怪物——一個好手指,一個頸項,一個胃,一個肘彎,但是從來不是一個人。」
- 分析:
- 「Man」的翻譯: 這裡的「Man」在英文中既指「人類」(humanity, mankind),也指「個體」(individual person)。中文翻譯將其處理為「人」、「人們」。
- 資訊結構: 英文原文中,"Man is not a farmer... but he is all. Man is priest..." 這種結構將「Man」作為主題,後面列舉各種角色作為述位。中文翻譯「人不是一個農民...但是他是一切。人是祭司...」也基本保留了這種主題-述位的結構,將「人」作為主題。
- 連貫性: 中文翻譯在處理「Man divided into men」以及後續社會分工的描述時,相對清晰地呈現了原文的邏輯。然而,當翻譯到「But, unfortunately, this original unit...」這段時,中文翻譯的語序和表達(「這原來的單位,這力的泉源,已經分散給眾,這樣精細地分了又分,零售銷光了,使它潑開來成爲水滴,不能再聚攏了。」)雖然傳達了原文的意思,但其結構感和流暢度可能略遜於原文的 "so distributed to multitudes, has been so minutely subdivided and peddled out, that it is spilled into drops, and cannot be gathered."。
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